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    The Song Thrush, a Ballad in the Tradition of Irish Folklore and Legend.

    Updated: Apr 17


    Croaghaun
    Croaghaun

    Croaghaun, the setting for my poem, is a mountain on the coast of the Isle of Achill in Ireland. However, this legend is purely an invention of the author, composed in the form of a ballad. It draws on some elements of Irish mythology, but there is no such legend to be found in Irish folklore. Achill (Eagle Island) is largely covered in peat bog. Common flowers and grasses include ling (heather), purple marsh grass, and bog asphodel. It is renowned for sudden weather changes with mists obscuring the landscape.


    I am greatly indebted to James Bartlett, who kindly agreed to narrate the poem for me. I think you'll agree he has done me proud. He is a fine poet and storyteller in his own right.


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    The Song Thrushnarrated by James Bartlett

    The Song Thrush

    originally published in Gallimaufry by Antony Fawcus. (Ginninderra Press 2017)


    Maeve lightly tripped across the moor

    as lark song filled the air,

    a liquid spill of sunlit notes

    to match her golden hair.


    She skirted bogs of asphodel

    to keep her lover's tryst,

    where grasses wave their purple heads,

    as soft as Achill mist.


    Brown waters of a mountain stream

    swirled past her, over scree,

    so lithe, alive with dragonflies

    and elfin mystery.


    Its laughter matched the love that surged

    in her expectant breast,

    as up the mountainside she climbed

    the path to Croaghaun's crest,


    for there before the day was done,

    'mongst lilac bells of ling,

    she'd pledge her life to her true love,

    and with the selkies sing.


    But, as she gazed upon the moor,

    a swirling wisp of cloud

    began to cloak familiar rocks

    beneath its cotton shroud.


    Expecting her true love to come

    to wrap her in his arms,

    she kept her watch on Croaghaun's crag

    suppressing growing qualms.


    At length she left the meeting place

    to search for her leannán.

    As daylight faded into gloom,

    her hopes sank with the sun.


    Then Sith, the grey-winged faerie child

    with eyes of em'rald green,

    began a song whose words beguiled

    young Maeve, the sweet colleen.


    With spells she wove a silken thread

    of lies to lead astray,

    and feigned the curlew's plaintive cry

    to lure Maeve from the way.


    In frantic search she tripped and fell

    into a stagnant pool,

    and sank beneath the drowned moonlight;

    a ghoulish death and cruel.


    At dawn upon the keening wind,

    A white-tailed eagle flew

    And spied a glint of gold upon

    The silver veil of dew.


    He swooped and took her in his claws,

    in lands of youth to dwell,

    where she became the mavis bird

    a song thrush, philomel.


    Now, in the Spring, the mavis bird

    nests in a rowan tree

    with feathered leaves and berries red;

    the bane of false faerie.



    Cheers! I hope you enjoyed my poem and Jim's narration.
    Cheers! I hope you enjoyed my poem and Jim's narration.


    Some notes:

    A selkie is a mythical creature resembling a seal that takes human form on land.

    'leannan' is a Gaelic word for sweetheart.

    'colleen' is an Irish word meaning 'country girl'.

    Sith is derived from the Gaelic word for 'faerie'.

    Both Maeve and Mavis are Irish names derived from the Gaelic for a song thrush (T. Philomelos).

    The Land of Youth is an Irish expression that roughly equates to heaven.


    Song Thrush image by Taco Meeuwsen from Hellevoetsluis, The Netherlands


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